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Innocence

Innocence

Photography Photography \ Nature | 02/24/06 @810 | GraphiteRaven | Comments critiques (9) | Views views (496)


Innocence
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as i drive by the old place
i see my old tree
it was my own space
with my own tire swing
i'd pass the day by
never knowing i'd leave
and now it has changed
they took down the swing
but the memory's the same
down by my old tree
i'd read in the branches
and grieve for dead leaves
and praise the new growth
in me and my tree
and pass by the day
in my old tire swing

taken with my old nikon, obviously i'm not a photographer, but i had some inspiration. :)

please be nice, i know i'm inexperienced!
 
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Avatar Passenger

 02/24/06 @850

The trees on the left and right are a bit distracting and I would LOVE to see a larger version of this shot for some more detail!
Nice work!

(I'll get back to vote)
 
Avatar Cigaro

 02/24/06 @853

i think the colours are great:)
neat shot, but i agree with Passenger, a bigger version would be nice:)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 02/25/06 @028

Agree with Ruth ....the trees at the sides are a little distracting.....the lighting looks beautiful!....a larger size would be nice!
Carlos
 
Avatar Inabottle

 02/25/06 @172

Yes trees distracting, a lil small, adn I dont like how the edges are faded out to black... nice snow scape fog adds a good mood, nice.
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 02/25/06 @701

Just crop this slightly and enlarge it a bit and it's a beautiful shot!! A nice scene!
 
Levanon

 02/25/06 @957

I like the mist or snow behind the tree.
I agree with the others on a slight crop, but a nice shot!
 
Avatar Foster

 02/27/06 @118

I would also like to see a bit more detail in this one. It's a nice composition, though.
 
Avatar OnPix-Artist

 03/02/06 @798

Oh God... I'm a bad guy...
I didn't have comment your last work... SORRY :p

Lovely place and your choice of composition is great ^^
Congratulations (thumbup)
 
Avatar zork

 03/13/06 @402

amazing light! :)
 
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